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Ay1 Run on sentences 2 Use of wrong words as3 Bad grammar4 Bad writing with no imagination5 Plot that could have been good but isn t6 Zero character development7 Dialogues that are too on the nose too cliche too much like the dialogues you d find in a historical romance spoof8 You can not relate to or connect with anyone9 Flat emotional tone10 What feels like writing11 No exploration of relationship dynamics or it s development 12 No apparent reason for the mcs feeling the way they do a trope in a lot of books but apparent and nenjoyable here cause bad writing13 Sexual of books but apparent and نامه های عین القضات همدانی / جلد اول unenjoyable here cause bad writing13 Sexual between them reads false or forced or just sudden out of the blue14 None of the witty banter and sweet romantic dialogues for which one picksp a historical romance novel15 Female Mc is a toe tag a proper maiden in distress I don t blame her for her parent s death or her mistreatment by her relatives But lady Show some spine I ve read books with that go along the Cinderella lines step parents blah blah But the MCs still showed a lot agency which made them a lot real16 Almost all other characters seem to be throw away characters With no real importance to the plot or it s progression17 The interactions between the characters are too short to give the reader a read wink wink on their relationship dynamics so you can t get emotionally invested or in anyway interested in the book THIS BIT IS SPOILERY 18 Everyone becomes the best of friends with everyone at a glance No literally They do Juliet the male mc s sister who is vaguely interesting discusses her wish that Jon should pay her attention in front of Mc on their first meeting She then says who are you first sentence to Emily that s the female Mc then well apparently you know how it s done if you have already stolen my brother s heart tell me how on earth do you get a man to notice you with just that one comma in that entire run on SPOILER OVER 19 Missed commas20 How Emily and the male protagonist s first meeting and second meeting and every interaction go21 How instantly Emily trusted a random dude male Mc protagonist s first meeting and second meeting and every interaction go21 How instantly Emily trusted a random dude male Mc her life story and life How she then also obeys him from that point on22 Fact that the book
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it s characters are forgettable that I ve forgotten the male mc s name despite the fact that I am reading the book while writing the review See I realized the book was shit and decided to finish just so I could write a full review I am now switching back and fourth between my good reads app and the reader app The short length of the book is good for this and for my sanity Hey I found something good to say about the book now on to the next problemProblem 23 Time just flies by The book keeps making time jumps during which the relationship dynamics of characters change the reader never gets to experience that gradual change that we see in most books We read these books to vicariously experience those relationships and how they change and flow it A family of her own When the handsome Duke of Norchess arrives he vows to honor and protect Emily but will secrets from her past keep them from. It was shortbut still a cute book Strong characters and I can t "Wait To Read The "to read the book about the Duke s spunky sister Looks like the author may have Die Plotter updatededited the book as many of the problems previous reviewers mention with spelling and formatting are fixed A cute short read I miss regencies where sex waitsntil after marriage so this one has sex than I like to see in a regency I picked this d p when it was a free promotion It was entertaining up when it was a free promotion It was entertaining was desperate for a good read when I was stuck at a hospital There was nothing but my phone with its wifi and 3g off so I raided my phone s Kindle app for free for one day novellas I downloaded and somehow forgot The first on the list was Macy Barnes s A Duke in Shining Armor It wasn t long before I realised the first come first served principle wasn t necessarily a good idea The author did try her best to provide an entertaining story bless her socks but reading A Duke in Shining Armor was like being trapped in a room with Connie Mason who d decided to write a Regency era novella after chugging a bottle or two I wrote a summary but it made t DNF misspellings wrong words and an entirely ridiculous plot line Honestly I m not a fan of ebooks But I decided to try this one and it was free at the time It had a promising concept When her family was slaughtered and she was forced into a life of servitude by her aunt and ncle Emily Moncrief had given p all hopes of having a family of her own When the handsome Duke of Norchess arrives he vows to honor and protect Emily but will secrets from her past keep them from a future togetherDramatic intriguing summaryDid the story deliver NoThe formatting is off so the whole story is one giant block of text The dialogue is stilted and repetitive The characters are too aware not given time to develop as people and not given to develop as people and not given to develop a romancerelationshipIt is in need of serious copy AND content edits There were missing words extra words missing punctuation misused punctua Good story but someone needs to proofread it I m giving this book 3 stars Yes it is a VERY short story and short stories do have an issue with a lack of character and story development There just isn t enough time to really get to know your characters and the stories can be really rushed Even with that in mind I do enjoy a short story every once in awhile in between books in a series to kind of break it p for me So I do enjoy them for what they are super At Any Cost uick fun short stories I liked this one and thought it was fun with a nice story 35 really A sweet short read A few editing mistakes that weren t numerous enough to pull me from the story but were frustrating because it is something that could be so easily fixed I have Nothing good to say about this book Nothing Zilch Nada Not one damn word And I always make it a point to give praise where praise is due Now let s get into the list of things I do have to When her family was slaughtered and she was forced into a life of servitude by her aunt andncle Emily Moncrief had given Havens Promise (Divine Designs, up all hopes of having. What keepss wanting to read what let s s connect And #what is glaringly missing here 24 Badly written foreplay that seems to #is glaringly missing here 24 Badly written foreplay that seems to glaringly missing here 24 Badly written foreplay that seems to sloppily and half heartedly put in by a virgin with no imagination25 I love you that comes out of the blue cause you re not expecting it You re not expecting it cause there was no buildup to it except some badly written nipple pinching There was no buildup to it cause time jump I love the I love you moment in books it s kinda the semi climax before the actual climax in romance novels It s the POINT OF the ROMANCE NOVEL hello It s a ROMANCE NOVEL Give s the romance Don t just time jump it THE REST IS ALL SPOILERY BUT THE ENTIRE BOOK IS ALREADY SPOILED SO REALLY DON T BOTHER CARING 26 This whole fucked Approaching the Guitar up scene Premise At some point in the book male Mc I know I must have read his name a few times But fuck it I have forgotten it again Anyway male mc my mom is annoying she s meddlesome she says I can t marry a girl without her approval And she wants me to marry Elisabeth The sceneMale mc I will talk to my mom get her approval Me ooh The book will have conflict now and maybe just maybe become interesting Male mc mama I wanna marry EmilyMama OK Go for itMe should have known lazy writing at it s laziest27 Badly written sex Oh gosh So so so so so badly written sex With the corniest most cringe worthy pillow talk28 Plot points that aren t sufficiently exploredExample this sceneEmily I overheard myncle and aunt say I m a bastard My pop isn t my popMe conflict of emotionsMale mc don t careEmily OK great28 The scene where she finds out her parent s death was her ncle and aunt s fault cause they made shady business deals She then grows a spine and says I will deal with this Male Mc then says nah don t bother your pretty self you just look after the wedding preparations I ll take care of this She says oh you handsome man OK Here take my agency again and here s a knife cut off the balls I just grew29 just wait till Jon sees you in that dress Juliet I bet he will think of grew29 just wait till Jon sees you in that dress Juliet I bet he will think of as a child no Emily says to the tomboy Juliet Translation don t be yourself Just dress pretty30 Suddenly Emily becomes an expert in the affairs of the heart and gives advice Again Out of the blue lines preceded by time jump This is literally the second scene after the cut the balls I just grew scene FYI the scene after that is her wedding and the book endsI ve changed my mind there s one flaw here 31 the book was too long32 This read like a sloppily written Cinderella book for adultsHave no spunk and have no spineOh oh lady that is just fineFor a man will find you by pure chanceAnd ask you wed him with or without a dance He will make all your problems go away You just look pretty and I love you he ll saySounds familiar Run on sentences Incorrect words protocol instead of prodigal for example Chapters that were one long long paragraph Not good Read like a bad wanna be Barbara Cartland. A future togetherThis is the first book of the Regency Heroes Series about gentleman who are noble and rescue their lady loves no matter the cost. ,