K Sick vicious and brutal story that kept my attention until the last few chapters it ot "a little weird boring Not the climatic ending I was hoping for after the "little weird and boring Not the climatic ending I was hoping for after the happenings throughout the book Carnal Slave by Vonna Harper The first of the Carnal Inc books Before I discuss plot let me just say what an absolutely lousy job of editing someone did Misspellings abound missing words modifiers syntax errors This drives me insane But if the story is The Lives of Stay-at-Home Fathers: Masculinity, Carework and Fatherhood in the United States good sometimes I can overlook it Not hereThe start of the story and about 23 of the book deals with her capture and the intense training she receives It is harsh brutal overwhelming There were times when I wondered why she did not just slam her head repeatedly into the concrete floor to bring about unconsciousness or even deathThis book is even brutal than Her Submission which I consider the better book certainly the better spelled and edited book If you remember my review of Willow Widen opens her front door expecting to see her ex boyfriend Mitch He must have heard she’s been fired and has come to offer the support she desperately needs Instead a commanding stranger overpowers her She’sagged tied up and robbed of sightEverything changesUnknow. Le for just the cost of training At the auctionI m
SURE SHE WOULD HAVE BROUGHT MANYshe would have brought profit for cost They are just oing to let that o For what is 113 of the total sales for the auction AbsurdAnd finally the idea that the reason he fell for her and is taking her away from all this is because thru her brutal training she found the strength within herself and became a better stronger person What a crock 23 of the book if not are dedicated to him breaking her making her just a piece of meat who does exactly what she is told or else How do we Gone: The Disappearance of Claudia Lawrence and Her Father's Desperate Search for the Truth go from that to a strong thinking woman BullVery disappointed on so many levels After Her Submission I really wanted to see where this began andiven the hints in that book it was obvious that Willow and her trainer ot together by the end of the book But it was such an illogical disjointed journey not understandable rife with spelling and syntax errors just frustrated the heck out of me. L to live is all she has She vows to survive the brutal training Or will she Master Damek has "his own agenda and domineering methods for molding the captiveFull length Carnal Slave taps into readers’ dark fantasies It’s told by "own agenda and domineering methods for molding the captiveFull length Carnal Slave taps into readers’ dark fantasies It’s told by veteran erotic writer now pressing her limits.
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HARVEST ASSOCIATION WAS IN CHERISE SINCLAIR S BOOKS WELLAssociation was in Cherise Sinclair s books Well to this book I was wrong about that Then the book kind of falls off the rails in the final third Spoiler alertThe idea that her former employer and her former boyfriend conspired to have her kidnapped and thrust into this program was already overkill The idea that her boss did it BECAUSE she had uncovered evidence of his shoddy building practices BUT never told anyone is absurd She protected him so he turns on her The whole scenario was too unrealistic too much an author s inventionThen her trainer falls in love with her pays the cost of her training the day before her auction and spirits her away not to freedom but not abject slavery either Bleagh First her former employer acted like he wanted to buy her to bring her to heel Second any human slave operation has no heart and is not oing to sett. N to Willow she has been targeted to be trained as a sex slave The job has one to Damek an experienced Carnal Incorporated operative Based on what knows "of the latest the lovely but insecure young woman will be easy to mold She’s "the latest subject the lovely but insecure young woman will be easy to mold She’s natural submissive Willow’s wil.