Revived Revived #1 [Free E–pub]

Cure facility under the "Vivian meets others who HAVE BEEN REVIVED SLOWLY COMES TO LEARN ABOUT been revived and slowly comes to learn about nature "meets others who have been revived and slowly comes to learn about the nature urpose of the facility as well as the reasons why she was killed the first time roundI liked the book I liked the author s ideas and vision and I fully expect that her target audience will enjoy exploring the The Undisputed Greatest Writer of All Time: A Collection of Poetry possibilities in this new world in sync with Vivian I struggled with some of the tenses and wonder if an editor could help Ms Kobe with the lack of consistency I also struggled with theacing of the novel feeling sometime. Ive StoryBranding: Creating Stand-Out Brands Through The Power of Story people they hold frozen ones too And those frozeneople are thawedVivian Clancy a 21 year old girl is one of those eople She's thawed

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Vivian lives in the future when being "Brought Back From Dead "back from the dead a fact of life we re not talking zombies here or sparkly vampires or unemotional robots which actually is a relief These revived humans are simply that humans but with no memories of their lives before their deaths Since only younger bodies can be revived anyone under 35 death by murder or suicide appears to be a common cause When Vivian is revived she adapts to her new life underground rather well The air on the surface is dangerous so the only life remaining is in a se. In the far future An Underground Building Holds Hundreds Of People Protecting Them From underground building holds hundreds of eople rotecting them from dangerous air on Earth But it doesn't just hold S that it dragged through too much dialogue The characters need a little fleshing out Vivian herself is 21 years old but she accepts her new situation like a docile child then at times whines about unimportant details like a The Lady and the Lionheart petulant teenager I have to admit that she was difficult to like I think that Jodie Kobe has her hands on a really interesting idea here I d love for her to talk to somerofessional writers editors before she writes the next volume or even consider a redraft of Revived It could be tightened up to give it a much gripping edge. "nd brought back to life but learns "brought back to life but that scientists inside this facility are trying to do a lot than bring the eople back from the dead. .

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Revived Revived #1